By Vageesha Mishra
Restless disposition,
Mind replicating chaos,
A wish that can’t come true,
Stuck in every thought,
Calling all shots.
A bewitched man,
Is what it has rendered you,
Drowning in the mess of your own desires.
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Text, Picture – By twinklingwords
WOW!! What a beautiful shot. In fact, I love capturing distinct changes of clouds. Your words are beautiful!! Great work TW!
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Thank you so so much Rak ❤ yess! Clouds are just so amazing, their change makes me go crazy with my phone at times! So I know what you mean 😄😀
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HAHA.. they’re indeed amazing
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And was about to ask you, why aren’t you writing anything……..
This speaks to me at so many levels…….
I mean to all of us…..
Poignant poem
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Heyy Shaggyyy! Long long time! I was busy yaar and so keeping away from WP but aakhir kab tak nai aati yahan 😛
Thank you so much for your kind words. How have you been?
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हमारी प्रार्थना में इतनी ताकत थी आपको आना ही पड़ा😁😁😂
I can totally understand, even I aint writing much these days. Been months now…..
I have been terrific, been working. First job….. So yea, pretty good……
You say, how are you??
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😂😂😂😂 oh Yesss! Yeah I figured. Hey congratulations Shaggy, that’s so nice to hear. And how are you finding your first job?
I’m gud. Been keeping busy. Btw have you seen Blade Runner 2049? I just did, quite amazing it is!
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First job is gone now, I mean I left it. Sometimes I feel like how could I ever explain to people what am I doing with life. Doing pretty fine though.
I have not watched it!!😢😢 Oh I am sure it is.
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Ohho. It’s alright as long as you’re doing fine, I think. The only person you need to explain is yourself and yeah your parents and also your spouse if you’re married, Indian society in short😂😂
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I am not married yet, the one I want to get married with has already blocked me on fb. 😢😢
Parents are okay, little freaked out but manageable.
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I’m so sorry to hear that yar. I hope it gets solved and turn happily ever after. If you read my latest post, you’d know what I went through past year. Focus on your goals friend, they’ll act as constructive distraction. Take care.
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Arre it’s okay Vageesha, I said it casually, on a lighter note.
I am much into girls right now. have some other plans.
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Lol who says all that on a lighter note?😂 hahaha alright nonetheless!
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Someone with a crooked sense of humor. I do make terrible jokes
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Hahaha!!
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I’d love to check your post though
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Dramatic picture 🙂
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Thanks so so much 😊😊
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https://theraksphere.wordpress.com/2017/08/14/book-blogger-test/
I’ve nominated you!
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Hey thanks so much. I’ll check that out soon 😄😄
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Is that not a very very deep poem, every word echoing so many thoughts. Beautifully penned, TW!
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Hey dear friend, Omg how long has been since I have talked with you. I had been keeping busy, so was away from WP but then it can’t go on for long and it calls you back!
Thank you so much for your encouraging and beautiful words. I’m so glad you found my poem so especially since I find it difficult to pen down poems.
How are you and your family? Is it still hot on your side? It’s so hot here.
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Those were beautiful lines!!
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Thank you soo much!
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Everytime that I open up your blog the first thing I want to steal is your tagline.Its so so amazing…
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Hey Ujjwal, so good to see you back. How are you? Haha La La Land does that to all of us ❤❤
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Even I am happy to get connected again.I am all good.How are you?
You are absolutely right
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I am good too. Anyway, keep writing yo!
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Sure.And even you too.
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These words thunder, rather than twinkle. I like them.
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Thank you so much, I certainly feel the same about your work 😁😃
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Such a beautiful poem. Love it.
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Thank you so so much!😄
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Beautiful pic along with the beautiful lines… Liked it…. 🙂
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It did go to spam! Thank you so very much for your kind words. 😊
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Thanks to you for approving it. Will be reading your other posts soon. ☺️👍
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Thank you so much for sparing your time and leaving such wonderful comments. Have a nice day😊
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A very powerful poem…”drowning in the mess of your own desires”. Wow!
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Thank you, thank you so much☺️😊
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Amazing. Glad I discovered your blog..
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Thank you, Sushmita. Glad to connect with you. Keep writing, your work is thought provoking ♥️
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❤
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Madam, this is bit tough for me. Can you explain?
Let me take a guess, the clouds are bit like our own mind messed up?
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Yes, friend. You guessed it right! The clouds reflect the desperation of our wish stricken heart and mind that is not able to look beyond the longing but at the same time is falling under several feet of problems that occur from being consumed by it.
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Wow, those lines speaks with deep meaning. Beautiful capture.
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Yes… that wish… !! Beautifully expressed there Vageesha. I see the longing… awesome poem. And all this while I was waiting for a new post when you have these gems hidden here. Lovely…
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Hahaha! Hey, thanks a bunch, Sundaram. Your comment made me so happy 😄 I’m so glad you liked it. Yeah those kind of wishes 😏
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