By Vageesha Mishra
“What?” She asked furiously.
“Yes, I don’t love you anymore,” He responded, avoiding her eyes.
She thought her heart was shattering into a million pieces and he didn’t even care to look at her?
“Look at me.”
He merely smirked and didn’t comply.
“Hey, I’m not the last guy on this planet.”
Her heart was sinking painfully when something struck her.
“Look at me.”
He didn’t.
“Well atleast you should have the galls to look into my eyes while saying all this,” she challenged, smiling sweetly.
That made him concede at last.
They stared at each other for a while until she spoke again.
“You’re lying.”
“What makes you think so?” He asked.
“Because your eyes are afraid that I would see through your lie but secretly, they are rooting for it too.”
He spoke nothing as he walked towards her, finally ridding himself of that nonchalant expression as it turned to discomfort.
“I knew I was ruined. But today I was betrayed too,” He spoke silently.
“By whom?”
“By my own eyes.”
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Picture – It’s a still from 2013 film Romeo & Juliet.
Lovely ending! Nice one!
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Thank you so much. I’m so glad you did.😄😄
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Beautiful ❤️ and that image is icing. 😊😁
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Haha thank you. Took me so long until dear Romeo & Juliet came to my rescue!
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Haha.. Great.. 😁
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Awsome and i just loved it.your hidden truth will be showcased by the eyes☺
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Yes, yes, eyes tell the truth, always! Thank you so much😃
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A beautiful betrayal. Often men try to hide their true feelings, which is evident on their face. 🙂
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Thank you😄 yes you are so right😊
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Beautiful, so much intensity in so few words, very powerful ❤
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Thank you so very much Belle😄😄
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Wow. ❤
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Shukriya!
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Nice ending and lovely story
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Thank you so much😄😄
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Beautiful! Loved the end.
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Thank you very much😄😄
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Perfect ending that added so much beauty to the story.loved it.
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Thank you for taking out to read and leaving such a lovely comment😃
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Pleasure is mine.
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Woah! The end surprised me…..for the good of course…..
Very beautifully written…..
You touch hearts with your writing
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I’m glad you liked my writing, it makes me so happy to receive such encouraging and beautiful words. And haha it was intentional, thank you 😄😄
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Wow.. Written beautifully.. I loved the ending.. 😊
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Thank you so much, it means a lot😄
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Amazingg 🙂 loved this
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Thank you so much😄
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Hey. Please check out my new expansion to the blog and give your reviews 🙂
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Okay will do, have a great day😄
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Thank you, dear Jeni, so much😄
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Amazing ending I must say !! Read it a couple of times over and over again ! Cheers !!
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Thank you so much for this beautiful comment, made me happy! Cheers to you too!
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Heyy, I hope you’re doing fine and I like the way you write!
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Thank you so much, Srijan 😊
I’ve been keeping busy so was away from WP but keeps calling back. Hope you’re doing good.
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I am doing okay! But you do seem low! Everything all right?
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Yeah it’s alright, thank you so much for asking Srijan 😊 I was travelling so couldn’t take out much time. I’m sure I missed tons of your amazing work?!
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Well not at all! I haven’t been that active on wp. Just came like a month back! And my heart still doesn’t want to believe your words that you’re okay. We joined wp at the same time! I remember you.
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Oh yeah I understand WP requires good attention otherwise it becomes less fruitful. And oh I didn’t realise we started around same time. Nice to hear that 😁
Umm, are you studying psychology?! Just curious.😊
Also I think this is the first time we’ve actualled talked as such.
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Yess and no. And let’s exchange emails and talk further and not here. Because something is wrong. Soo. Send me your email please!
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I’m afraid Srijan I don’t exchange emails 😦 and anyway I keep busy so I don’t get much time to talk. But I honestly appreciate you efforts of trying to break through! Best wishes for your psychology career (if you’re pursuing it that is!) I have a feeling you’d be quite great 😊😁 hoping to read more from you 🙂
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Heyy it’s fine. If you won’t reply mee. Make an exception and just give. I will send you some stuff just read it okay? I insist!
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Just suggest them here, how about that? Reading suggestions are nice!
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Well they are not suggestions. I wrote something for youu. I’d like to send it.
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You know you can always post that here! This a writer’s platform afterall! By here I mean comment in this case!
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Well why can’t youu just give me your email? I am stubborn. You’re giving. I don’t know.
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Yeah I’m stubborn too buddy, so I’m not going to😂😂 have yourself a good night. I’ll catch up on your work in due time. Take care!
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You’re not going anywhere. Come heree. Don’t do this to yourself. Let me!
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Short, crisp, intense and dramatic. Wow!
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