By Vageesha Mishra
Running soundlessly, I try to get as far away from here as possible.
How could I let him get into my head?
How could I? He has no humanity in him but why does it feel like a lie?
No, I’m going soft. Oh, no.
I must go away soon for I can’t let myself fall for him.
I can’t.
“Leaving so soon?” He emerges suddenly through the maze of trees, his dark wings spread wide.
Afraid, I take a step back but he is fast. In a flash, he is here, staring daggers in my direction.
“I’m leaving.”
“You can leave but I would still stay here, however much you hate it,” he replied, motioning towards his heart.
“You can’t fight me,” he said coming closer and closer, challenging me to disobey.
“In your dreams,” I spat.
He laughs darkly and says, “How ironic!”
Confused I try to compose myself. No where to run, I begin to panic.
Her eyes snap open, adjusting to the darkness of of her room, she checks the time, 3 a.m.
“No more reading before bed now, giving me exciting nightmares,” she scolds herself and slips into a deep sleep just as a black feather twitches lazily by the foot of her bed.
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Picture – Other than multiple names mentioned in the picture, I got this image from Pinterest.
Dark, intense, well written. I envy people that know love. That have someone who takes them as they are.
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Thank you, Neal. Since you write so amazing yourself, this compliment means a lot!
Oh they are the luckiest I suppose❤
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Glad it made you happy and I ain’t that amazing (maybe a little) :P. Keep writing. Don’t give up on this 🙂
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Haha! 😂 Thank you, I’m trying. Same to you though on writing 😀
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Intense… nothing else comes to my mind..🙂🙂..
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That’s alright 😄 intense is what I was after anyway! So thank you so much!
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😊😊..
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Intense and well written. I’m in awe of you🙂
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Thank you so much, that’s a huge compliment 🙂 🙂 btw the feeling is mutual because I can’t write poems anymore, so admire greatly people like you, who write with such beauty.
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That’s so sweet of you. Thank you☺
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😀
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wow, this sent shivers down my spine….For a minute I felt he was behind me and I panicked…but then I too woke up. You write so beautifully and your writing is always so evocative Twinklingwords, love it ❤
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Oh but though a dark angel, he is not evil, he is merely pretending because it’s easier for him to live a cursed life like that. And he is deeply in love with her!
So don’t worry, he wouldn’t harm you anyway 😄😁🙌😀
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You have a wonderful imagination ❤
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!😁😄❤
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And thank you so so much Belle, it has made me so happy😄😄
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Woah!!! I am scared of turning around now…… Who knows if someone’s standing there……..
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Who knows Shaggy. Turn around and let me know!😂
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Shaggy is dead I am the ghost
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And quite tech savvy, I must say.
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Haha…. Couldn’t help checking out your blog!!!
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No thanks, dear ghost, I only prefer angels and warlocks checking out my blog, kindly let Shaggy take over😁😁
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Ghosts have feeling too madam, you just hurt me 😞😞
Hi Vageesha Shaggy here….
Thanks for resurrecting me 😊😊
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Lol not the wisest thing to do with a ghost. Let me make amends, thank you dear ghost.
Welcome back Shaggy, oye I prefer my blog name or anything else you please, thank you!!😁😀
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You prefer your blog name? Okay I am sorry…..
Hello Twinklingwords pleasure meeting you
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No need to be sorry and hello. Same here!😁
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That was an interesting read sha.I liked the ending.oh you can write poetry.don’t tell me you can’t
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Haha thank you so very much, Jeni. That is such an inspiring comment, it sure made me so happy!
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Whoa……awesome!!! Loved this! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so very much Novelistbaba! 😄
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Pleasure reading you!!! 🙂 🙂
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😀😁
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How can you do this to me ?? Am I supposed to read your dark and intense stories at 2 AM while I’m still afraid of dark !!? Starting was okay for my well being but as the middle portion started to caught me up and that last lines 🤒 you have no problem because you have written this wonderful post but now problem is for me actually to sleep in peace tonight !😅
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Lol I suppose you slept with the lights on then?! My apologies to you as well as to everyone else if it really scared you guys.
I was trying to make it dark romance but kuch aur hi hogya because it left so many scared instead😭😭😂😂 damn, if anything you need not fear he’s a good angel.
Thank you by the way!
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Yeah, he came and he was such a gentleman 😂😂😂 We had a small talk and I ordered him to get away with that girl coz I wanted to meet that girl who reads before bed ..I’ve never seen one 😋
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Lol that’s sad, I know a lot of girls who read before bed, you’re talking to one too! But not everyday because sometimes I’m writing or watching a movie or listening to music or just lost in thoughts!
Yeah he may be a gentleman but I’m pretty sure he wouldn’t let you order him around! Don’t do that😂😂😂😂
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He may be the strongest but the dream was mine !😎 I can do whatever I want 😋
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Lol itni himmat kaha se agyi?😂😂(just kidding, yo!) Have a nice day😄
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I do know girls who read like that but it’s medicine books all the way 😂 And some even doubt on my creativity as I have that time to steal other’s ideas 😂😛 And don’t be biased in matter of your evil gentleman.. he may be the strongest but the dream is mine !😎
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Medicine books? Wow that’s interesting! How do you steal them?!hahahaha about the last part!
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It was *as if* 😂 and I do steal ideas .. I mean not in “that way” but think that there are so many ideas around us floating in air and other persons don’t have that sense to recognize them.. As it happens, I catch the best ideas around me and put down on paper 😇
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Ohh like that! Hahaha good going!
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Damn true! Happens to me often!
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Hey thank you for reading ans appreciating😄 Yes, that’s me too 😭😂
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A different writing of yours, here I witnessed. And I am impressed, girl. 🙂
You carried it off really well, keeping the dark suspense almost till the end.
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That is such a nice compliment😄 thank you yar, seriously means a lot😀😄
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Enjoy the much-deserved appreciation, girl.😉
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😄😄
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That is dark, very dark and cold and scary!
The suspense was a good one, yet the last line keeps the reader confused!
I just posted my next writeup https://thewritewomanblog.wordpress.com/2017/02/02/beyond-the-game/
Let me know what you think?
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Hahaha thank so much, it means so much when someone reads and leaves interesting and kind comments. Thank you. Oh sure I will 😄
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You know what, you always have a suspense waiting at the very end, keeping the reader engaged up to the last word! You can always count on me to come back here!
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Omg! You actually did read my work and identified the pattern❤ how nice❤ thank you for such amazing words dear fellow writer.
I will check your latest post in a while and looking forward to your amazing engaging writing more😄
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Amazing work!
Loved the end.
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Thanks so much!😁
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The intensity of the short write up was so strong👌
Amazed right from the start!
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Thank you so much, Ashutosh 😃 means a lot!
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You’re most welcome✌😁
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That one one thrill packed precise piece of writing! Loved it! 👌
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Hey! Long time! Thank you so much, if it seemed thrilling to you then that’s amazing and more amazing for you’re awesome with these ❤😄
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I don’t know how but the follow I had on you had got unfollowed and that’s why I’ve been missing your posts! I had to go through my old comments to hunt you down twink!
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That’s alright, it happens, I’ve missed tons too in your side of world, good thing I’ll keep a tab now😁
And that is so sweet of you dear choas, so much contrast in your writing and your persona, they are dark and you’re gentle and sweet😄
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Big smile on my face staring at this comment for a few seconds now! 😄 I’m honoured twink. You just made my day! Give me a day or two and will definitely catch up with your work! 😌❤
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Haha! Meant every word🙌😄 glad it made you happy!😁😁
And yeah, I’ll do the same!😄❤
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Bin this typo comment please! 😐
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Haha! I did! No worries!
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Perfectly crafted!! Wow….the ending!!
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Thank you so so much!
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Damn! This is great writing. Wow with the twist in the end. The good thing is you’ve edited it well so it has just the right amount of words. Neither less nor more. Just enough!
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Hahaha! I’m glad you found it so. Your words have made my work so much better since you read with so much sincerity ☺️
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That I will agree to. I truly believe sincere reviews and comments add value to one’s writing. After all that’s how more people will hear about us ,know us and read our work.. By reading what others have to say about our writing.. Lol, like it or not that’s a fact. 😉
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Hahaha! I agree with you, Jay. It does happen, any kind of publicity is publicity after all. Helps people know about you and indulge in your work. Thank you for such kind comments, Jay. Have a bright and nice day ahead☺️
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