By Vageesha Mishra
Wake up!
Look outside your window,
What do you see?
A cloak of greens?
An artist’s finest work up in the sky? A city bustling with life? A world hustling to be somewhere?
A landscape covered in filth?
No place to be? Liars, backstabbers, cheaters? Wearing invisible masks?
Homeless begging for survival?
Starving dogs wagging their tails at the sight of food? Perpetrators wreaking havoc?
A little girl?
Throwing bread crumbs at hungry dogs, And then dancing with joy when they devour. Her eyes gleaming with hope That this world hasn’t yet robbed her of.
A woman making her way to work?
Walking tall in crisp clothes, Despite crying herself to sleep last night, for she is not letting anyone take this away from her, Her right to be happy and content.
A man opening the door to an enormous bakery?
That was once smaller than his means, But not his dreams.
A mother trying to make her toddler eat?
A man waving goodbye to his wife?
A group of chirping birds among rustling leaving?
An elderly giving away free food to those deprived? And basking in happiness when their faces break into a grateful smile.
Men in uniform rushing to take charge of the day? Hearts free of guilt with honesty being their oldest companion.
A teacher balancing books in her hands? Favourable weapons to mould impressionable minds.
So what do you see?
A world going up in flames?
Has your hope left its home?
Or have you learnt to invest it wise too?
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Text – twinklingwords
Picture – twinklingwords
It all depends on our perspective. This is so good and inspiring.👌
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Thank you so so much dear. Made me so happy!😄
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Interesting perspective!! Liked the flow …
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Thanks Abhay, yeah it could be one😊
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You are quite a poet Ms Twinkling. Where is the photo taken? 🙂
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Hey Jolene 😀 Thank you so much 😄 Miramar, another beach in Goa.
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Extremely beautiful and inspiring.
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Hey! Thank you extremely much😀
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Lovely words, and a succession of images that imprint the mind. I looked out my window and saw a bird making its way above rooftops. Thanks for encouraging your readers to look outside.
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Thank you so much for reading my post and leaving such a nice comment. Also, that image is pure bliss. Somehow I’m imagining it a sparrow!
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We all think in a different way and we all have a different perspective about everything. How great is that? everything happening might be same but no one will see them in a same perspective!! Loved the way you expressed!!
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Thank you so much Rak. Wow you’ve added so much beauty to my work ❤❤ yes I think that makes this life so amazing, positive unpredictability!
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totally agree with you!!
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Aaaah the things we see and how we see. 7 billion ways to see. Amazing isn’t it? Nice post with words that twinkle thoughts!
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Thank you so very much for your valuable comment 😄 That’s such a creative blog there. InkingOutLoud, woah! ❤
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Love this piece
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Words were amazing, but the picture is amazingerrrrr……
How come I didn’t see it.
But seriously, that’s a deep poem. It says so much, without saying much.
The reality, the dreams.
Welcome Back!!! 😀😀😀
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Lol you’d have to write a welcome back again😂😂
Thank you and thank you so much. I’m trying to change my perception in life so that is why I had written in down.
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Haha! Welcome back!! Waiting for your write ups…..
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Yeah thank you, welcome back to you too and same here once again😂
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It’s all says how good is your imagination power 🙂👍
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Thank you so much Divyang. 😊
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Wow. Liked, double liked and loved this one. I think this is one of the best pieces you have written, TW. The contrast you have painted, the play of words, the picture you let the reader paint in their mind’s eye. Beautiful.
There is pain, deceit, dishonesty, anger, hatred but does not the world need the other emotions to keep living – love, honesty, integrity, compassion, empathy. It is true that the negative is counterbalancing the positive for all we hear and see are rarely the positives of life. Yet, there is hope. Hope that since we need both to survive, even that little bit of love, honesty, integrity, compassion and empathy that remain will dry up only the robots take over!
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Oh❤❤ is it really my best piece? Seriously, you’ve just made my day, really ❤❤😄😄🙌🙌 thank you sooooo much, so much!
I think your comment made this work so much better giving it further insights and depth. I agree, it is the counterbalance that is keeping us from being evolved into mindless self absorbed robots!
Thank you for such a valuable comment 😄😄
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That was on a positive note
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I’m so glad you found some positivity in that 🙂
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Thank you so much 😊😊
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Nice!👌👌👌👌👌
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Thanks a lot😄😄
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Always!😊✌
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This is extraordinary piece of writing. We see the world through our eyes. We see what we want to see. How true. Im still wondering how did hou notice all these! Damn good.
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Heyylooo! Thank you and so so much dear friend. Hahaha perks of being an introvert, you observe and learn way more than you could ever know. Just like your magical six letter stories, sum of such major happenings in life❤❤
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You’re welcome sha.Are you an introvert?
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Yess, quite much but there are times you have to socialise so then I have to leave my comfort zone. How about you? And how are your dear?
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Beautiful
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Amazingly well-written! I like the contrasts drawn in the poem. You write well.
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I’m glad you liked it, I see such contrasts everyday, couldn’t do without making a poem on them. Thank you😃
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To observe and to be able to express it so simply is a gift. Keep up the good work😊
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I’m so honoured 😊☺️♥️
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Yes she rightly said you are really good at observing…
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Hahaha thanks a ton☺️
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Beautiful.. Simply beautiful..
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Thank you so much, Jay☺️
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Whoa girl. I’m glad I stumbled upon this. Great work there. Looking forward to reading more of yours’.
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Thank you so much for sparing your time and giving my work a read, girl. So kind of you. I will read your work too, I’m sure they are amazing ☺️
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It’s been a real pleasure :*
Oh. They are hardly as amazing as yours. Nevertheless, can’t wait to hear from you ❤
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Such kind words. Yes, soon. And have yourself a good day/night ☺️
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Hi for some reason, I can’t access your profile. I don’t know why
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You can find my blog at
http://www.ayshamuhammed92.wordpress.com
Let me know if there is any further concern. Love
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